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Thursday, 14 April 2016

MY MATH STRATEGY

At Timothy's House.


11.4.16
Yesterday was the worst day ever. i shouldn't even tell you this well i will. Never try this on your bikes at Your house.
It all started yesterday on a very very very wet day Me Tim and Esmonde were going for a ride down a very very long steep hill. Esmonde said “Lloyd wait for Tim so he can go down first”. After a few seconds Tim went past then all i heard was go go go so i went fast as down the hill it was so slippery that i nearly fell off. A little while later we were walking up the hill so we could go down the other hill it looked muddy so muddy.Then i just reached the top of the hill. “yey i'm at the top of the hill i said”. Some seconds later i got to the gate where we were gonna go. When i went down i went super fast like lightning i was at the mud then i was thinking to myself control yourself lloyd then i took a sharp turn then i crashed into this big humongous tree It was so so sore.



Now this is the interesting part.
Just as we got the bikes over the fence tim said lloyd should we go for a ride then i replied OK. Then i rode Tametakas
Bike then the chain came off then i said i'm going now then i pushed myself to the corner that tim was coming out of. the nek minute i crashed into tim he got his knuckles stuck in the fence and i whacked my leg into the bar in the front.
The end hope you enjoyed.


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