This is my same same subtraction this is very tricky enjoy.

This is my first book review hope you like

I am learning to connect my ideas together using different connectives and a variety of sentence beginnings.

To be successful I will start sentences like this

• For example,
• Added to this,
• If … then
• In others words
• Plus

Copy and paste your draft persuasive writing here.

                                    Bullying

                                          By Lloyd

I think that bullies shouldn’t be allowed at Tautoro School.

The first reason why I think bullies should not be allowed at Tautoro School is it against our hoe values No. We are meant to be showing Tikanga,Aroha,Kaitiakitanga,Manaakitanga,

Whakawhanaungatanga,Mana,Wairua,Kaha,And Tumaia.

The second reason why I think bullying shouldn’t be allowed at Tautoro School is bullying stops children from learning. So if they make us stop learning then we will go down grades and that will suck.

Another reason is so the juniors don’t get hurt and scared. That's why we have to be brave and step up.

In summary i think

My next learning steps are:

To use the correct structure for persuasive writing

Learn to use emotive language

Plan more supporting detail

Use great connectives.

My persuasive writing about the one and only Ant Man

I am learning to become independent at organising the structure and language features of my persuasive writing.

I will try to have

• an opinion at the beginning
• Main reasons and supporting detail
• Use emotive language
• Use connectives
• End with a summary

Ant Man

By Lloyd

I think Ant-Man is the best superhero because he can shrink and grow large and the thing i mostly like about him is his speed when he’s small.

One of my reasons why is because he is the best is because if he gets locked in a room he can run to the key lock and shrink straight through it because he is really tough. He trained his mind to make himself go through the keyhole it took him days to do it.

Another reason I think that Ant Man is the best superhero because he always finds a way out of a tricky situation. For example, if the yellow suit tries to kill him he can put a blue kind of blade into his belt and that will make him transform to big or small.

Third reason is he is able to control what ants do. when he wants to put some sugar into his tea he will just have to look at the ants and they will do the job for him that's why I like the ant-man. When he was in the water he had to make the ants with his mind he had to make them pull him out just by using his mind then all the ants lifted him out and then they took off.

Last reason why is because in the end when his daughter nearly gets killed ant man goes to save her from the yellow suit. When he puts the everlasting shrink mode in he would die. As the yellow suit tried to kill the nt he died because he used the everlasting shrink mode but really he didn’t die and he came back to life cause he he used the big mode which made him come back to life.

This is my brilliant book review hope you enjoy.

Start your book review here

Today i read Bok Choy, written by Paul Mason.

This book is about Jacob,Ah Sum, Mrs Bishop and her son William. I read Bok Choy it is a fiction.

The story is set in 1865 in Otago. This book is mostly about Jacob and Ah Sum. When Jacob fell off the cliff he just about drowned but Ah Sum helped him. He is just a man that is there to stay. Mrs Bishop thought that Ah Sum is a bad person.

My favourite part of the book is when Jacob woke up in a darkened hut and when he recognised Ah Sum. He was safe and  home to his mum. Jacob notice that Ah Sum painting where he was. Jacob was angry with Ah Sum earlier. His feeling change Towards Ah Sum.

Hi this is my goals for term 3 I hope you like it

Check our this animation I made to show my Te Reo Maori learning Try to runaway from the shark

Goal Reflection. Next Term I Will Put More Effort Into Achieving My Goals