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Friday, 21 October 2016

The most amazing story in the world.



Fun at church

My next step i will do is stay focused like how i stayed focus on this story.


On a warm Sunday afternoon me and my dad were getting dressed for prospective elders. When i was finished putting my white T-shirt on my dad yells brother Grunt is going to pick us up soon.So i replied O.K then a few minutes later he turns up in his van waiting he puts on his suit and knocks on the door. Once I answered the door I shouted dad he’s here so he quickly ran put his shoes on and came out. When we jumped into the van brother grunt said “wait i’ll just pick Quinton up” and we both said “yup”.

Once we picked him up it took about 4 mins he was like a sloth getting changed. When we left with him the movie was starting I was overjoyed then when Thomas S. Mon-son came on we sang Teach Me To Walk In the Light once that song was finished the last man stood and about a hour later it was finished. My dad and I walked out then he told me if I want to be a elder and i said yes.

As we were walking out of the driveway he told me that he left his bag in the van so he told Quentin that if he could tell his dad that my dad's bag was in the van he also said Yes so we started walking home then i asked my dad if i could wear his jersey because it was cold at night so yeah. Once we got to heke street this dog started chasing us.The dog was as brown as mud. The dog’s teeth were as sharp as a spar.
Then I started running home and my dad was trying to kick it when he kicked it it went back home so i finally reached home and then i was safe. Then i went to sleep and had a good night rest.

That day was fun i hope i never get chased again.

Wednesday, 21 September 2016

This term we've been making maori videos about talking maori and say he/she is doing whatever so hope you enjoy.

This term i have been learning to describe what my friends and i are doing using simple sentences.


To be successful we need to:
Know the kupu of Maori for me (ahau) you (koe) he/she (ia)
Use E aha ana to ask (what)

I am successful because I can ask what are you doing and i can say he/she is dancing and swimming


Kei te kanikani ia,
kei te kaukau ia.



Tuesday, 30 August 2016

Are you good at understanding what you read prepare to be amazed because look at this.

                 I'm learning to ask and answer my own questions


               I learnt that you shouldn't run on a slippery wharf

Monday, 22 August 2016

This is my same same subtraction this is very tricky enjoy.

This is my first book review hope you like

I am learning to connect my ideas together using different connectives and a variety of sentence beginnings.

To be successful I will start sentences like this

  • For example,
  • Added to this,
  • If … then
  • In others words
  • Plus

Copy and paste your draft persuasive writing here.

                                    Bullying
                                          By Lloyd
I think that bullies shouldn’t be allowed at Tautoro School.

The first reason why I think bullies should not be allowed at Tautoro School is it against our hoe values No. We are meant to be showing Tikanga,Aroha,Kaitiakitanga,Manaakitanga,
Whakawhanaungatanga,Mana,Wairua,Kaha,And Tumaia.

The second reason why I think bullying shouldn’t be allowed at Tautoro School is bullying stops children from learning. So if they make us stop learning then we will go down grades and that will suck.

Another reason is so the juniors don’t get hurt and scared. That's why we have to be brave and step up.

In summary i think

My next learning steps are:
To use the correct structure for persuasive writing
Learn to use emotive language
Plan more supporting detail
Use great connectives.